Its kind of soon in the book for the heart to heart. I had wished for more attempts against her life before she started on her "I have to keep going" ramble.
I'm so bore, supposedly "exciting" stuff happened and it was good in that moment but the author doesn't seem to know how to follow momentum.
Did we have to sound racist? Why couldn't it have been handled in a more tactful way?
Really cliché, like in your face cliché.