Not as concise as the previous one, it read a bit all over the place. Bucketfuls of angst that got a little tiring after a while. Damon and Kit had tons of angst going for them. They are both pining after one another and everyone is on their business telling Kit to go back to Damon, that he is suffering and shit.
The pacing dragged its feet through mud and relationships didn't read as interesting anymore.