It's a good concept, nothing new because I have read other series where the hero or heroine get sucked into another world (example; Narnia, Fushigi Yugi, Inu Yasha) and it has been done a lot better than this. The writing is amateurish and the dialogue really awkward at times. I dunno if I will finish this.
I want to give credit where its due, there is tons of potential here. Let's hope the writing catches up.